Action Story - Captured by: Angelo Cruz

Feb

2016

Action Story - Captured by: Angelo Cruz

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HARDWORK. Johana Edeza, 13 finishes her assignment in her English subject on Room 213 of Rizal National Science H.S. so that she can pass it on time, February 3.

PHOTOGRAPH. Kaye Guda, 13 captures picture of her classmate Avegael Zaragoza and Jordan Alcantara for his output on her Journalism Subject, February 3.

SINGER. Isobel Suba, 13, practices her performance for the RiSci got Talent as one of MAPEH Club's activities in Rizal National Science H.S.,February 3.

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3 comments:

Rigel German said...: A great third shot. There can be more improvements to the photo though such as to avoid other people in the shot (background) and to remove the flare at the upper-left corner but still a good photo. In terms of the caption, I think it would be better to give the full name of the school and not abbreviate H.S. and to recognize the event more like this:'RiSci Got Talent'.
-RJGG; February 23, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Rigel German said...: Great reflection shot at the first photo. It has great balance and focus was clearly seen. Caption can be improved by rephrasing. For me, instead of saying "assignment in her English subject", I would just put "assignment in English" because it was seen in the photo and to also avoid redundancy.
-RJGG; February 23, 2016 at 6:47 AM
group fouuuur said...: I appreciated your work because the captions are good.I want the 1st and 3rd pictures but I think the 2nd one needs a different angle. -Patricia SJ; February 27, 2016 at 11:08 PM